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looking out the window

a tear begins to fall

looking at you house

can almost hear you call

 

why did you go and leave me

why did you have to die

why couldnt you have waited

why dad just why

 

it doesnt feel that long ago

i was sitting on your knee

just a little girl

when you used to sing to me

 

told me you was with me

and you would be forever

told me you wernt going anywhere

coz we would stick together

 

i thought that meant forever

not 10years down the line

why did the doctor lie

he said you would be just fine

 

they killed you

that they cant deny

all of them did

i just dont understand why

 

the council left the paint

that caused the caused the fire

which in turn caused the explosion

they are just a total lier

 

also them who didnt get you out

fire alarms didnt sound

then the fire brigade they were far to late

when they arrived half sat on the ground

 

the ambulance didnt help

they were gonna leave you be

someone had to show them

had to make them see

 

thos bullies upstairs

they played a part

bullying you into depression

stupid old fart

 

if they moved him back

another fire theyd be

id make sure they wernt saved

they deserve it you see

 

why didnt the hospital leave the tumor alone

they killed you in the end

without that op youd still be with me today

and that they cant pretend

 

did they even give you that needle

when you was in a coma asleep

the one to keep ya blood moving

so your life you could keep

 

i highly doubt it

else how did another clot form

a week of waiting

for you to transform

 

but that never did happen

because the doctors just lied

as far as im concerned

it is their fault you died

 

 

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Comments

  1. daddyslittlegirl90

    btw!! john decided he didnt wanna go see lazytown so now no-ones going lol greaaat so theyre all here with me =/ gotta go mums in a mood


    daddyslittlegirl90

  2. LeeAnn

    Beautiful as always, see the words have all come back to you. Hugs


    LeeAnn

  3. 79pounds

    that could be a song. a lot of people in the music business really go for lyrics that tell a story. what is lazy town and all those other races you were talking about?


    79pounds

  4. bonnytiz

    beautiful poem, it really tells the story, so sad!! I dont know what lazy town is,is it a kids thing for the holidays?
    Hugs.


    bonnytiz

  5. daddyslittlegirl90

    its a kids tv show but they have come to the theatre here johns a big fan..
    79 i left a comment on my other journl explaining the races for you


    daddyslittlegirl90

  6. Ianrou

    Keep writing Becky, you are so brilliant. Hugs xx


    Ianrou

  7. msa160

    YEA SIS U GOT LOADS OF TALENT,HANG IN THERE LOVE YA,ANN


    msa160

  8. sadmom66

    It helps to blame some one. Good poem.


    sadmom66

  9. daddyslittlegirl90

    im not blaming people wrongly... its all true everything they done each one of them contributed and the hospital killed him. i didnt mean for this poem to sound as though im blaming people wrongly i really am not i wouldnt do that but all these people did do wrong


    daddyslittlegirl90

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