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With Out You. Mood
Monday, April 28, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story

With out you, my world is a bleak existence.

With out you, I am cold and alone.

With out you, I live in chaos.

With out you, I can't get away from the darkness.

I need your light that brought the smiles to my face.

I need your warm skin next to mine.

I need the very breath that you gave me once.

With out you, it is impossible.

With out you, my soul dies with each passing day.

With out you, I do not exist.

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  1. DukeDraven

    That type of love can be destructive, Diamond. If this is only a poetic exercise, then it simply expresses the depth of love.
    I know you're probably expressing your relationship right now to some extent.
    Love for yourself has to come first, darling. Love can really hurt sometimes. Peace and love always


    DukeDraven

  2. AliciaH

    I CAN RELATE THIS POEM, THESE FEELINGS AS I FEEL WITH
    OUT THE TRUE LOVE OF MY LIFE WHO IS NO LONGER HERE'I
    MISS HIM SO, IT'S HARD TO BELEIVE HE PASSED AWAY 18YRS AGO. SOMETIMES HE IS SO REAL IN MY DREAMS, I WANT TO GRAB HOLD OF HIM AND NEVER LET GO, AND HE ALWAYS HAS A SMILE ON HIS FACE, ALWAYS!!!


    AliciaH

  3. JitterBob

    Wow now this one I can really relate to...


    JitterBob

  4. Crazywolf5

    This one I like because my boyfriend passed away last year it describes how I feel.


    Crazywolf5

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