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Tuesday, May 13, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story

i was struck by a love so sudden and sweet

your face shown like a star and made my stone heart beat

my face turned pale as ever, my legs refused to walk away yet when you look at me what could i possibly say?

my troubles seem to just melt away

 

then the blood rushed to my face and you took my sight away

words from your eyes did start, they spoke as a chord does from a string

and what a sweet melody they played

 

you seem to hear my silent voice and love's appealto dream

i never saw a sweeter face than the one that stood before me

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  1. happysadkitty

    god love that poem beautiful


    happysadkitty

  2. Alejandra08

    yes, it is.... i know exactly how that means.... good lck


    Alejandra08

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