Midnight Skys

Posted on 07/14/08, 03:45 am
The midnight sky sparkle and shimmer in the breeze
With every birdsong a childs hope glitters in their eyes

But as the midnight skys shatter the sparkle is no more and the glitter of hope dies in the mothers arms the darkness hunts for the lost souls

The poor one, the dark ones, the hopeless onesx

This was written by milly17's daughter
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  • Reply #1 07/14/08  6:00pm
    Love the imagery I get from it, its again really good
  • Reply #2 07/14/08  6:01pm
    Love the imagery I get from it, its again really good
  • Reply #3 07/15/08  3:39am
    thankyou
  • Reply #4 07/16/08  6:31pm
    Your daughter is truly talented just like her mum, beautifully done. Be well.
  • Reply #5 07/17/08  9:21am
    excellent discriptive tell your daughter she is very talented
  • Reply #6 07/31/08  5:33am
    thankyou i will

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