Love the imagery I get from it, its again really good
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Midnight Skys
Posted on 07/14/08, 03:45 am
The midnight sky sparkle and shimmer in the breeze
With every birdsong a childs hope glitters in their eyes
But as the midnight skys shatter the sparkle is no more and the glitter of hope dies in the mothers arms the darkness hunts for the lost souls
The poor one, the dark ones, the hopeless onesx
This was written by milly17's daughter
With every birdsong a childs hope glitters in their eyes
But as the midnight skys shatter the sparkle is no more and the glitter of hope dies in the mothers arms the darkness hunts for the lost souls
The poor one, the dark ones, the hopeless onesx
This was written by milly17's daughter
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Reply #1 07/14/08 6:00pm
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Reply #2 07/14/08 6:01pm
Love the imagery I get from it, its again really good
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Reply #3 07/15/08 3:39am
thankyou -
Reply #4 07/16/08 6:31pm
Your daughter is truly talented just like her mum, beautifully done. Be well. -
Reply #5 07/17/08 9:21am
excellent discriptive tell your daughter she is very talented -
Reply #6 07/31/08 5:33am
thankyou i will
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