youngjedi

Broken.....

Posted on 07/02/08, 04:41 pm

A soul that breaks free
Untied from the family tree
I lost my fight
Through all those painfull nights
A childs hopes and dreams troddon into the ground
Buried deep never to be found
What have i become
Feelings so numb
Again you have won
I look in the mirror at a shattered reflection
Far from perfection
Unregonisable
Strangled in pain with nothing to gain
Overtaken with fear, you'll always be near
I try to hold my head up high
When all i want to do is die

• Reply #1 07/02/08  4:42pm
  
  pindy
  touching x
• Reply #2 07/09/08  3:07am
  
  milly17
  You are a true poet to let your feelings shine
• Reply #3 07/09/08  5:04pm
  
  tonelowe
  wow,what feelings you must of felt going through, here if you need me ok? huggles.xxxxxxxxxxx
• Reply #4 07/12/08  8:44pm
  
  rhondalee
  beautiful my friend it is beautiful
• Reply #5 07/18/08  7:21pm
  
  nevagiveup
  great poem i can feel ur pain keep ur head high keep fighting u dont want to die just escape the pain right ? i know how u feel stay strong keep writting it will help u x

We are hoping to get peole to write, stories poems etc. We also are researching publishers and if you have any questions, then please ask. We do ask you to be patient as we have only just started.Good luck my friends, let us all get a daily strength book out. yes?