Discussion Topic
Tangled up in Blue
Posted on 07/03/08, 04:04 pm
His eyes command mine
The reflection of my desire
Is all unbeknownst to him
Yet my eyes shine brighter
Because they are in his
These eyes that demand
My hairs to stand at attention
Everything in me leans toward him
And I take a dip into madness
Swim around in the blue pools
Only until the currant pulls me back
And I roll up onto the shore
Laying there with bated breath
Until he comes again, my death
The reflection of my desire
Is all unbeknownst to him
Yet my eyes shine brighter
Because they are in his
These eyes that demand
My hairs to stand at attention
Everything in me leans toward him
And I take a dip into madness
Swim around in the blue pools
Only until the currant pulls me back
And I roll up onto the shore
Laying there with bated breath
Until he comes again, my death
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Reply #1 07/03/08 4:07pm
I meant current. -
Reply #2 07/03/08 7:58pm
Well I hope he does not come again as I would hate to loose a friend and he would have a fight on his hands!
You have such a nice way with words, your poems always touch my heart.
Keep writting! -
Reply #3 07/03/08 8:10pm
That's so passionate, took my breath away :) -
Reply #4 07/04/08 12:34am
Thank you so very much everyone!!! : )
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