moonstar

i sit tired

Posted on 05/16/08, 05:58 am

here i sit tired
as coffee house music
swrils around the room like cigarette smoke
sweet yet sad
new yet stale
compared to the new green earth
so i try to relate to wildflowers
and birth
i breathe and choke
broke

by~ janis

• Reply #1 05/16/08  8:10am
  
  brenno
  every time i read one of your short poems i get so much out of it, how do you fit so much into so little words. this is one of the best ones you have done. broke but brilliant.
• Reply #2 05/16/08  9:58am
  
  blankcanvas
  i totally agree with breno love this u fit so much meaning into so little..:)
• Reply #3 05/17/08  3:09am
  
  moonstar
  thanks..it's just the way it comes out of me.
  i feel the best word to sort of pull the feeling thru my soul.
  you guys are just as good, i love your work!
  x
• Reply #4 05/17/08  3:12am
  
  jannis
  i echo everyone here you poems fill me with imagery and love....hugs

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