Welcome to my mind.

Posted on 05/15/08, 12:53 pm
Welcome to my mind.
A dark and dreary place.
You can't tell what i'm thinking,
just by looking at my face.

My deepest and most inner thoughts,
are ones you'd never guess.
Just by being around me,
how I look or how I dress.

You have to reach into my soul,
all though you never will.
Trust me you don't want to,
my thoughs alone will get you killed.

So if you think you know me,
stop and thinkg again.
Because in my heart.
and in my soul
is a place you've never been.



:)
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  • Reply #1 05/15/08  1:03pm
    So true. You tell them! I wish I could get other's to see I am not what they think inside.
  • Reply #2 05/15/08  5:04pm
    Very true words,you realy don't know me from the outside apperances,on the inside of me is a differant story,nicely written.your friend carla7777..hugs...xxoo
  • Reply #3 05/16/08  4:02am
    Very well said i keep trying to tell people you cant judge a book by its cover. you never know people are holding inside.
  • Reply #4 05/16/08  9:50pm
    Very well written!! Like me On the outside I look so happy but inside I am sad!!
  • Reply #5 05/19/08  4:20pm
    Thanks for the feedbacks guys. :]

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