A girl i use to know (my story)
There was a girl I use to know, she was born defective, she was deaf and worse she was a girl. Later the doctors fixed …
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I was sitting bored in class and wrote down what i was feeling in this little but moving poem
A little girl sits at her window, shes there all alone as she stares and ponders she remembers everything thats gone wrong "WHACK" "WHACK" there it goes again, mommy upset daddy, and now daddy's doing her in. Shivers tingle down her scrawny little spine, as she recalls what daddy did to her that following summer night As she sits there curled up, timid in her bed daddy decides its time to finally creep in "STOP!!! NO!!!", she shrilled really loud, "GET OFF!!" "NO!!" said the daddy extreamly proud "You are gonna take it, your not a little girl!" "This will only hurt for a while so let me finish what i came to do!!" "NOOOO, DADDY Please, just let me fall asleep!!" "THis hurts so bad, why do you have to do this to me?" "WHACK" as his hand thrashes across her face, blood starts to burst out, but still she continued to lay. A few more minutes, she had to lay in agonizing pain, but its not the last time her daddy will play his little game. When he finally decided he was done with her that night, she just couldnt sleep so she sat up and cried. A glass began to shatter, she escaped from her thoughts, she looked up at her reflection and hated what she saw! Every mark, every scratch, and every single scar will give a tell-tale detail of how much she was torn apart! She thought to herself, maybe ill try to get some sleep tonight, the same thing she tells herself every single night! But then a frown came across her face, as she soon came to realize this wouldnt be the case Where is this girl now? What has become of her? She wrote this poem you are reading to become even stronger! Posted on 05/10/08, 07:05 pm |
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That was great and so true, It made me cry.
You are very talented it is a great poem. I hope it helped to write it all done.
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God I wish I could openly talk about what happened to me, this was such a moving poem I m not at that point yet, I know it sounds stupid but I m still to embarrased to discuss. Good on you.
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Well done hun, exclusive talent and good for you getting it out like that. What a good way to release how you are feeling
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Aww i thank all of you for your replies, its not always easy being strong but poetry is the only way to ....positively get out my furstrations...thx guys!!..and if anyone needs to have me listen im always here!!!xxbrittany
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WOW. deep, bitter, painful. I can feel it. Im so sorry.
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wow..thank you!:)..i thank the support from everyone!!!
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