What is Depression

Clinical depression is a state of sadness or melancholia that has advanced to the point of being disruptive to an individual's social functioning and/or activities of daily living....

Join Now

Free, anonymous support from people just like you.

Spread the Word!
Get a DS flyer to post
DS Store is Open
DS t-shirts and more
Discussion:
FAKING DEATH - A POEM
Watch this 
View More Posts Ignore
Here is my latest attempt at being a poet. Please be kind.





FAKING DEATH - A POEM



Feeling pain from their loneliness, they sought our attention,

through deception and lies, their plan took conception.

They sought through our guilt, to seek our empathy,

and succeeded in spades, to play with our sympathy.



They faked their death, it was fairly easy,

they came on as a relative, all flustered and queasy,

asking questions about, what happened on here,

It was then that things started, to sound rather queer.



Some people got suspicious, and started to ask,

who is this person, who is taking us to task,

for what should have been obvious, to anyones eye,

could it possibly , just all be a lie.



So someone who knew her, phoned to discover,

an underage girl, had been undercover.

It was all a game, to get a reaction,

it hurt just the same, it divided us in factions.



Some still felt sorry, for this troublesome youth,

others just wanted, to get to the truth.

Some hurt souls left, while others still stayed,

however you look at it, a harsh price was paid.



So please think twice, before taking those pills,

to how it affects us, when somebody kills,

themselves or a character, they played on the board,

it's to high a price, for us on DS to afford.







Please remember... suicide hurts those around you who are left behind.



Peace, and HUGS!
Posted on 01/26/08, 10:01 am
RATE THIS POST:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative
41 Replies | Most Recent Add Your Reply
Reminder: This is a support group for Depression. We trust you will do your best to remain positive and helpful. For more information, see our rules of the road.

You may also create your own Member Groups where you can moderate the discussion.
Comment:
Email me when others reply to this topic help
View More Posts Ignore
Reply #1 - 01/26/08  10:15am
" nice poem "
RATE THIS REPLY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative
View More Posts Ignore
Reply #2 - 01/26/08  10:21am
" Peace and hugs Testy {{hugs}} "
RATE THIS REPLY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative
View More Posts Ignore
Reply #3 - 01/26/08  10:23am
" I love your style testy, thanks for this :) "
RATE THIS REPLY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative
View More Posts Ignore
Reply #4 - 01/26/08  10:24am
" like it hun.xx "
RATE THIS REPLY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative
View More Posts Ignore
Reply #5 - 01/26/08  10:25am
" Nicely written "
RATE THIS REPLY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative
View More Posts Ignore
Reply #6 - 01/26/08  10:26am
" Very good and to the point!! Thanks for sharing


~R~ "
RATE THIS REPLY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative
View More Posts Ignore
Reply #7 - 01/26/08  10:29am
" very good insperational poem sorry cant spell
peace&hugsx
rosiex "
RATE THIS REPLY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative
View More Posts Ignore
Reply #8 - 01/26/08  10:32am
" I tried my best... I look at it now and see I made a few syntax errors, and a few places perhaps could have been worded better... It is hard to see everything until it is posted.

Thanks for all the positive comments.
HUGS! "
RATE THIS REPLY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative
View More Posts Ignore
Reply #9 - 01/26/08  10:43am
" bump "
RATE THIS REPLY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative
View More Posts Ignore
Reply #10 - 01/26/08  11:03am
" Very nice poem with a very important message. Good job! "
RATE THIS REPLY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative

First | Previous | Page: 1 2 3 4 5 | Next | Most Recent Add Your Reply

You might also like ...

Sunday Blues

By GrownNSxy 9 Replies

It is what it is. No since in faking it. I makemy own threads

82 pounds

By TrB22 8 Replies

poem i wrote last night about my ED. 82 pounds you do not scare me. Not today anyway. You made me cry the other …

friend in need

By madashell 8 Replies

please send missmymoomoo hugs she had a death in her family tonite let show her love please

Content on DailyStrength.org is for informational purposes only. We do not provide any medical advice, diagnosis or treatment. More info
Portions of support group and treatment information provided by Wikipedia under the GNU FDL license
Copyright 2008 DailyStrength, Inc. All rights reserved. Terms of Service | Privacy Policy | Report Abuse | HSW International