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It is what it is. No since in faking it. I makemy own threads
Clinical depression is a state of sadness or melancholia that has advanced to the point of being disruptive to an individual's social functioning and/or activities of daily living....

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FAKING DEATH - A POEM
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Here is my latest attempt at being a poet. Please be kind.
FAKING DEATH - A POEM Feeling pain from their loneliness, they sought our attention, through deception and lies, their plan took conception. They sought through our guilt, to seek our empathy, and succeeded in spades, to play with our sympathy. They faked their death, it was fairly easy, they came on as a relative, all flustered and queasy, asking questions about, what happened on here, It was then that things started, to sound rather queer. Some people got suspicious, and started to ask, who is this person, who is taking us to task, for what should have been obvious, to anyones eye, could it possibly , just all be a lie. So someone who knew her, phoned to discover, an underage girl, had been undercover. It was all a game, to get a reaction, it hurt just the same, it divided us in factions. Some still felt sorry, for this troublesome youth, others just wanted, to get to the truth. Some hurt souls left, while others still stayed, however you look at it, a harsh price was paid. So please think twice, before taking those pills, to how it affects us, when somebody kills, themselves or a character, they played on the board, it's to high a price, for us on DS to afford. Please remember... suicide hurts those around you who are left behind. Peace, and HUGS! Posted on 01/26/08, 10:01 am |
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nice poem
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Peace and hugs Testy {{hugs}}
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I love your style testy, thanks for this :)
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like it hun.xx
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Nicely written
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Very good and to the point!! Thanks for sharing
~R~
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very good insperational poem sorry cant spell
peace&hugsx rosiex
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I tried my best... I look at it now and see I made a few syntax errors, and a few places perhaps could have been worded better... It is hard to see everything until it is posted.
Thanks for all the positive comments. HUGS!
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Very nice poem with a very important message. Good job!
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